"I Missed on Purpose"
So, we lost the Seniors v. Teachers (more like the Seniors/Juniors v. Teachers + Mr. Haag) basketball game. But at least it was fun…I guess…. Never fear, there’s always next year…oh wait.
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On the bright side, I finished my results section, but it was just toooooooo loooooooong. 1425 words?!?!?! My entire paper is already at 4800 words. Please kill me. Good news is that I know some places in my methods and literature review where I can cut down my word count by around 400-500 words. I’ll probably find some way to cut down my results too. Bad news? I have no idea how long my discussion section is going to be. But it will all work out at the end, right? (I’m really sorry if you like your bad news before your good news).
Anyways, let's start with my (VERY) basic overview of my discussion section. I will be referencing the following three sources:
- Donald, Ralph R. “Antiwar Themes In Narrative War Films: Soldiers' Experiences As Social Comment.” Studies in Popular Culture, vol. 13, no. 2, 1991, pp. 77–92.
- Weakland, John H. “Themes in Chinese Communist Films.” American Anthropologist, vol. 68, no. 2, 1966, pp. 477–484. New Series
- Bongjin Cho et al. “Cultural Values Reflected in Theme and Execution: A Comparative Study of U.S. and Korean Television Commercials.” Journal of Advertising, vol. 28, no. 4, 1999, pp. 59–73.
The first two sources, I will use to discuss the basic layout and guidelines of a typical discussion section of a thematic analysis paper. The third source will be used for my conclusions.
In his paper, Ralph Donald’s conclusion is simple, but lacks lots of connections. Donald found 4 different antiwar themes through his thematic analysis. But in his discussion he only explains why these antiwar themes exist but not how they correlate with each other. John Weakland, on the other hand, does not give the same broad conclusion that Donald had. However, Weakland does give a very detailed explanation of the contradictions and the connections between all of his themes. Obviously, I want to synthesize the structure of the two sources in my discussion section. So the following is the outline of the overall flow and content of my discussion section:
- I will first discuss any interesting connections that I find within my themes
- I will provide a visual aid in the form of a thematic map
- My conclusion based on my results
- First I will compare my results to Cho Bongjin et al. to show that the thematic changes follow common cultural differences between America and Japan
- However there is no loss in complexity, these changes are too insignificant, minute, or small to significantly impact the overall thematic structure/content of the anime
- Then I will compare my results to previous studies that hypothesized that anime lost its complexity and thematic properties during the dubbing process
- Significance
- These themes re-emphasize and shed new light on the cultural differences between American and Japanese values
- Individualism v. Collectivism
- Also, these themes show the inherent/basic values in collectivist and individualistic societies
- Perhaps the most important is that these themes can be used with future research studies to give more specific examples of the thematic differences between a dubbed and original/subtitled anime.
- Limitations
- Even if the themes listed here were changed, it does not mean that every aspect of these themes themselves were changed during the dubbing process
- The thematic analysis was subjective, so the thematic differences can be subject to change
- The three anime used, although culturally important in America, don’t necessarily represent all of the anime that has been brought to America
- Future Research
- My literature review was organized in a way where I posed a broader question: Why do American audiences find anime to be appealing because of its themes, even after there are thematic changes during the dubbing process?
- My research was posed as the first step of answering the overall question, so the next step would be to find what themes are kept when anime is brought to the United States
- Another possible research opportunity is using another sample size to find the thematic changes
So that is my basic outline of my discussion section. There are still a few holes that I might need to fill here and there. Also it does not have much detail, but hopefully it will be as complex as my literature review.
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